I will submit a new draft tomorrow if there is no other feedback. Thanks Weijun
> On Jan 29, 2018, at 9:26 AM, Weijun Wang <[email protected]> wrote: > > The HTML file updated in place. > > Thanks > Weijun > >> On Jan 27, 2018, at 10:12 AM, Greg Hudson <[email protected]> wrote: >> >> On 01/23/2018 06:43 PM, Weijun Wang wrote: >>> I've uploaded an updated version at >>> >>> http://cr.openjdk.java.net/~weijun/rfc5653bis/draft-ietf-kitten-rfc5653bis-07.html >> >> This is a great format for reviewing these changes; thanks for >> generating it. >> >> Line 416 does not capitalize "optional" in "optional services", but >> lines 385 and 391 do. >> >> Lines 422 and 424 should probably capitalize "should". Line 429 should >> probably capitalize "may". >> >> At line 598, I would lean towards leaving "MUST" in lowercase as we are >> describing an application requirement, not prescribing one. >> >> Line 1174, I would leave "MAY" in lowercase. >> >> Line 1229, "may" should probably be capitalized. >> >> Line 1369, I would leave "MAY" alone as this seems more descriptive than >> prescriptive. >> >> Line 3221's use of "SHOULD" is prescriptive, but there's no other way to >> request the default QOP. So I would leave it lowercase (or change the >> wording, but I'm not trying to open any more cans of worms). >> > > _______________________________________________ > Kitten mailing list > [email protected] > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/kitten _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
