Dave, why don't you give it a polish, then.

-scott




                                                                                       
                            
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                    06/19/2001           Subject:     RE: [VOTE] xml.apache.org 
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> I've updated the charter in xml-admin with the last wording
> changes that were discussed.   The changes are visible at
>
> http://xml.apache.org/websrc/cvsweb.cgi/xml-admin/charter.txt?
rev=1.2&content-type=text/vnd.viewcvs-markup

I agree with the general content, but the sequencing, wording,
and spelling bugs kept piling up, then I got to:
"General Mailing List
This newsgroup is open to the public.
It is intended for discussions about cross-project"
...and it was just too unpolished for my taste.

So I vote -1 on it as it stands. It needs many small repairs.
.................David Marston


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