Junio C Hamano wrote:
> Jonathan Nieder <jrnie...@gmail.com> writes:

>>> +   /*
>>> +    * If the remote helper advertised the "refspec" capability,
>>> +    * it will have the written result of the import to the refs
>
> perhaps s/will have the written result of/would have written result of/?

That would sound like 'If the remote helper advertised the "refspec"
capability, it would have written the result of the import to the
refs, but it didn't, so...', so I think "will" is the right tense.
But 'will have the written' is awkward.  How about:

         * The fast-import stream of a remote helper advertising the
         * "refspec" capability writes to the refs named after the right
         * hand side of the first refspec matching each ref we were
         * fetching.
         *
         * (If no "refspec" capability is specified, for historical
         * reasons the default is *:*.)
         *
         * Store the result in to_fetch[i].old_sha1. [...]
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