On Monday, August 4, 2014 6:11:28 AM UTC-7, Gervase Markham wrote: > On 21/07/14 11:23, Gervase Markham wrote: > > > Hi Alina, > > > > > > Thanks for running this review :-) Lots of interesting stuff in here; > > > forgive me if I focus on the bits I think may need more work. > > > > > > On 19/07/14 00:33, Alina Hua wrote: > > >> NO SURPRISES Previous: Only use and share information about our users > > >> for their benefit and as spelled out in our notices. New: Use > > >> information in a way that is transparent and benefits the user. > > > > > > Why was "and share" removed? > > > > The response here was: > > > > "RESPONSE: "Use" can encapsulate the act of 'sharing' so we streamlined > > the text to include only "Use"." > > > > We, Mozilla, are committing to these principles, so it is implied that > > this statement actuall is "[We will] use...". So I think that "use" > > implies used by Mozilla, which would make "share" a separate thing, > > because it enables use by others. Therefore, "and share" is not > > tautologous, and should be retained. > > > > Reading through, it seems that possible fixes to the other issues I > > raised are all still under consideration. > > > > Gerv
Hi Gerv, As we are mulling over the feedback, we've come up with a coupe more options. What do you think of these? NO SURPRISES Approach information in a way that is transparent and benefits the user. or Handle information in a way that is transparent and benefits the user. Context: Ideally, we'd like to use a verb that is inclusive of the data lifecycle - collect, use, store, share, etc - without having to list them all out. DEFENSE IN-DEPTH Combine multi-layered security controls and practices with open-source auditability. Context: Although it doesn't apply in all cases (hence the weaker wording that you noticed), we'd like it to be inclusive of the advantages Andreas expressed Trust but Verify blog post - i.e. we have an extra advantage by being open to external verification. _______________________________________________ governance mailing list [email protected] https://lists.mozilla.org/listinfo/governance
