On Sat, 4 Sep 2004 06:04 am, Shachar Raindel wrote: > On Fri, 3 Sep 2004 21:21:39 +0300, Shlomi Fish <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote: > > The Blitz Lecture is now finished: > > > > http://shlomif.il.eu.org/lecture/W2L/Blitz/slides/ > > > > Please read it and comment. > > http://shlomif.il.eu.org/lecture/W2L/Blitz/slides/x/ > Usually nowadays, the login is graphical, and there is no need to > start X manually. Additionally, you have an unneeded "a" there. What > about saying a word or two about gnome in this slide, and also about > othe WMs? >
Done. > http://shlomif.il.eu.org/lecture/W2L/Blitz/slides/equivalents.html > > problem with the direction of the parenthesis there. > Fixed. > http://shlomif.il.eu.org/lecture/W2L/Blitz/slides/console/ > > What is the meaning of the last bullet in this slide? > I was referring to Telnet or SSH. Paraphrased to make it clearer. > http://shlomif.il.eu.org/lecture/W2L/Blitz/slides/console/goodies.html > > A note about: Ctl+z , Ctl+s, Ctl+q ? > Well, regarding Ctrl+S and Ctrl+Q - I mentioned them in an early incarnation of the Basic Use lecture, and people said that they should not be mentioned them. Jon Control (Ctrl+Z, bg, fg, etc.) used to be mentioned, but was removed from similar reasons. > http://shlomif.il.eu.org/lecture/W2L/Blitz/slides/console/filesystem.html > > I don't like the title of this slide. Maybe ×××××××× ××××××× ×× > ××××× > ××××××? Or maybe even writing few words about the different > methodology than windows (single tree - no C: D: E:, mount) > Fixed to ××××××××. As for the difference from Windows and mount - I think it should be reserved for a more advanced lecture. > http://shlomif.il.eu.org/lecture/W2L/Blitz/slides/console/common_cmds.html > > What have you written about less? Did you mean "Why have you written about less?"? > Also, please note that for novice user, the standard output is usually > his console. > OK. > http://shlomif.il.eu.org/lecture/W2L/Blitz/slides/help/info.html > > You have a spelling mistake in the second bullet. Also, note pinfo. > Fixed. > http://shlomif.il.eu.org/lecture/W2L/Blitz/slides/help/howtos.html > > Once again, parenthesis stuff. Also, link to the TLDP copy if the user > don't have these locally. > Done. > http://shlomif.il.eu.org/lecture/W2L/Blitz/slides/packages/apt.html > > Any referance to the new yum system used in Fedora? > I need someone to fill in the details for me. I had no experience with yum so far. > http://shlomif.il.eu.org/lecture/W2L/Blitz/slides/foss-philosophy/copyleft. >html > > Bad grammar in the last bullet, and in the second > Fixed. > http://shlomif.il.eu.org/lecture/W2L/Blitz/slides/foss-philosophy/more-info >.html > > Broken HTML tags here. > Fixed. > > > Overall comments: > > No single word about gnome/other desktop managers. This was fixed as part of the X-Windows slide. > No single word about multimedia under Linux I suppose I can fix it. We have a separate multimedia lecture right after this one, but saying a few words would be good as well. > No slide which says "demonstrations" - the idea is that the people > will hear the lecture, and will leave the hall saying "Wow, this Linux > stuff is uberly cool. I must try this 1337 stuff at home", not to feel > "Wow, this Linux stuff is complex like hell, I have to do a BsC in CS > in order to understand even the basics of it", which is the feeling > your lecture is giving. I see. > I am also missing some screen-shots, and explanations about why > OpenSource is good (free, evolve fast, secure, few comments about UNIX > and standards completion) > Screen-shots would be good, right. As for why open-source is good, I tried to do it in the foss-philosophy. (perhaps not too successfully). > Also, you might also point the people who are afraid of installing > Linux to cygwin, so that they will be able to experiment with a *NIX > environment before installing Linux. Also, pointing the to Superior > OSS replacements to commercial applications on Windows will be good > IMHO (if they will get used to the interface, their transition will be > much more easy) > OK. I'll think about it. Regards, Shlomi Fish > Cheers, > Shachar > > -------------------------------------------------------------------------- > Haifa Linux Club Mailing List (http://www.haifux.org) > To unsub send an empty message to [EMAIL PROTECTED] -- --------------------------------------------------------------------- Shlomi Fish [EMAIL PROTECTED] Homepage: http://shlomif.il.eu.org/ Knuth is not God! It took him two days to build the Roman Empire. -------------------------------------------------------------------------- Haifa Linux Club Mailing List (http://www.haifux.org) To unsub send an empty message to [EMAIL PROTECTED]
