See suggestion below:-
On 19/08/2016 12:55 PM, Susan Hares wrote:
>
> New:
>
> / A non-secure transport can be used for publishing telemetry data or
may
>
> other operational state that was specifically indicated to non-
be non-
>
> confidential in the data model. /
>
>
can = it is possible to do it
may = you have permission to do it
I offer two choices for the second correction:
s/to/to be/ (as indicated)
s/to/as/ (which is perhaps better than my first suggestion)
Bill
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Dr. J.W. Atwood, Eng. tel: +1 (514) 848-2424 x3046
Distinguished Professor Emeritus fax: +1 (514) 848-2830
Department of Computer Science
and Software Engineering
Concordia University EV 3.185 email:[email protected]
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Montreal, Quebec Canada H3G 1M8
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