Bill: Thank you for your comment. Just to be clear, your revised comment is:
New /A non-secure transport may be used for publishing telemetry data or other operational state that was specifically indicated as non-confidential in the data model. / Sue -----Original Message----- From: i2rs [mailto:[email protected]] On Behalf Of William Atwood Sent: Friday, August 19, 2016 4:14 PM To: Susan Hares; 'Andy Bierman' Cc: [email protected]; 'Alissa Cooper'; 'Juergen Schoenwaelder'; [email protected]; 'Kathleen Moriarty'; 'IESG'; 'Jeffrey Haas'; 'Joel Halpern'; 'Lou Berger'; [email protected] Subject: Re: [i2rs] Kathleen Moriarty's Discuss on draft-ietf-i2rs-protocol-security-requirements-07: (with DISCUSS and COMMENT) See suggestion below:- On 19/08/2016 12:55 PM, Susan Hares wrote: > > New: > > / A non-secure transport can be used for publishing telemetry data or may > > other operational state that was specifically indicated to non- be non- > > confidential in the data model. / > > can = it is possible to do it may = you have permission to do it I offer two choices for the second correction: s/to/to be/ (as indicated) s/to/as/ (which is perhaps better than my first suggestion) Bill -- Dr. J.W. Atwood, Eng. tel: +1 (514) 848-2424 x3046 Distinguished Professor Emeritus fax: +1 (514) 848-2830 Department of Computer Science and Software Engineering Concordia University EV 3.185 email:[email protected] 1455 de Maisonneuve Blvd. West http://users.encs.concordia.ca/~bill Montreal, Quebec Canada H3G 1M8 _______________________________________________ i2rs mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/i2rs _______________________________________________ i2rs mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/i2rs
