All,
I have completed my AD Evaluation of draft-ietf-intarea-gre-mtu as
a part of the publication process. I only have a few minor comments for
the authors to address. Once that is done, I will start the IETF Last Call.* Section 1 - The 4th paragraph specifies that the techniques described in this document are limited on what protocols can be in the GRE payload, but doesn't say anything about the delivery protocol. The Terminology section indicates only v4 and v6 are applicable as the delivery protocol discussed in this document. I think it would be useful to expand the 4th paragraph of the intro to mention the limit on the delivery protocol. * Section 1.1 - s/specific MTU discovery/specific to MTU discovery/ - The definition of "fragmentable packet" should include mention of IPv6 - The definition of PTB should be consistent and indicate that IPv6 uses ICMPv6 Type=2 for PTB messages. * Section 2.2 - I would suggest clarifying the first bullet by saying that the fragmentation logic is derived from the payload protocol. Regards, Brian
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