Hello Lantrans.  I am having some problems re-phrasing a few sentences (I
don't really like any of the translator's suggestions) in a translation I am
revising. Although the French is quite simple, the English translation
sounds somewhat ambiguous.  I would appreciate your opinions or any
suggestions.  The context is a software localization ad describing the
company's services.  The phrases in ** are what (I think) needs to be
rephrased (I may be wrong).  I have supplied the original French sentences.

1) We offer the localization of:  Display files and their formats, including
words, phrases and other elements; *fields containing multiple values (des
champs � valeurs multiples)*; *fields containing multiple meanings (des
champs � significations multiples); abbreviations...

2) (Original) Une s�rie de statistiques d�taill�es, r�sultant du travail de
localisation effectu�,  est fournie � la livraison du projet.

(Translation) A series of detailed statistics, *compiled after a
localization project has been completed*, is supplied upon delivery (of the
project).

Thanks for helping me out.

Ylana Corcos


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