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----- Original Message -----
From: "Zdenek Styblik" <zdenek.styb...@gmail.com>
To: "Dan Gora" <d...@adax.com>
Cc: "ipmitool-devel" <ipmitool-devel@lists.sourceforge.net>
Sent: Tuesday, April 9, 2013 9:31:02 AM
Subject: Re: [Ipmitool-devel] [PATCH 1/3] Fixed help for sdr command.

On Fri, Mar 22, 2013 at 1:15 AM, Dan Gora <d...@adax.com> wrote:
> Fixed the formatting of the help command to make it clearer what
> options the sdr command has.
>

Hello,

attached is diff and output of my take on 'sdr help'. Diff
incorporates all proposed changes to 'sdr help'. Originally, changes
were split into two diffs. To be honest, it's not that much different
from the original, but there are differences.
I particularly didn't like this ``"list | elist [option]. Available
options are:");'', because I think it's pointless and if not
pointless, then ugly to put it inline. Another difference is 'sdr get'
actually requires Sensor_ID to be supplied, so '<...>' has to be used
instead of '[...]'. There are some other changes, see the diff.
Since I'm not a native English speaker, it makes sense if somebody who
is checks spelling etc.

Best regards,
Z.

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