On Tuesday, March 15, 2016 08:26:15 Stephen Kelly wrote: > Lydia Pintscher wrote: > > Hi everyone, > > > > "A world in which everyone enjoys freedom and privacy and has control > > over their digital life." > > > > Unless there are major objections within the next week I would like to > > conclude the process and from now on use this as our vision statement. > > Not a major objection, but some feedback: It's very wordy at the end > especially with all the 'and's in it.
I agree, the two "and"'s sound a bit bumpy/"holprig". I very much like that freedom is in there, this fit's my wish to express some kind of independence. How about skipping the "privacy" ? This is with no or only very little interpretation included in "have control". Alex _______________________________________________ kde-community mailing list [email protected] https://mail.kde.org/mailman/listinfo/kde-community
