Am 19.03.2016 um 21:30 schrieb Alexander Neundorf: > On Tuesday, March 15, 2016 22:53:03 David Jarvie wrote: > ... >> This may read a bit better, although it does slightly alter the emphasis: >> >> "A world in which everyone has control over their digital life and enjoys >> freedom and privacy." > > How about one more tweak ? > > "A world in which everyone can manage their digital life enjoying freedom and > privacy."
Well, that's two tweaks (SCNR ;) But I like the idea, so how about really just one tweak: getting rid of the double "and": "A world in which everyone has control over their digital life, enjoying freedom and privacy." Reason: I don't want to just manage it, I want full control. cheers, Michael _______________________________________________ kde-community mailing list [email protected] https://mail.kde.org/mailman/listinfo/kde-community
