On 1/26/20 9:16 AM, Ingo Klöcker wrote:
On Freitag, 24. Januar 2020 15:02:24 CET Philippe Cloutier wrote:
Ahem, wasn't that fast? The mail you quote is not phrased as a proposal,
but as a request for comments. Just a quick first look reveals at least
the following issues:

The currency units used are unclear.

Tuxedo build tailor-made hardware and all this with Linux!

I suppose s/build/builds/

All the computers and notebooks are assembled and installed in our house.

"our house"?

"in our house" means in the house/building were Tuxedo Computers resides. As
opposed to "are assembled and installed in a sweat shop in some cheap-labor-
country".

Regards,
Ingo


since the text is on KDE.org, using the word "our" makes it unclear whose house the laptop is being assembled in though. KDE's house?

It should probably say, "[...] assembled and installed in-house." Or even, "[...] assembled and installed in-house, not outsourced." to really drive the point home.

Sorry for not catching this during the patch review.

Nate

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