On Thu, Oct 17, 2013 at 5:51 PM, Fidel N <[email protected]> wrote:
> Hey Edward, this is a small brainstorm, nothing too elaborated, but > hopefully can give you any idea you could use for that. > Thanks for this. It might be effective in an external article about Leo, but I don't know where it find a place on Leo's web site. After thinking about all the issues, I have decided to make minimal changes as follows: Home page tells just a bit more about Leo, and in a *slightly* more technical way. The new words are at: http://leoeditor.com/ There is even a stealthy link to DAGs. The home page has a new link, "Learn why Leo is special", to a resuscitated preface: http://leoeditor.com/preliminaries.html#preface The preface is a great opportunity to give the big picture, without having to explain every little thing. It's a teaser. It's much better, imo, than long-winded explanations, such as the old "Leo in a nutshell". Even better, the "What people are saying about Leo" sections http://leoeditor.com/preliminaries.html#what-people-are-saying-about-leofollow directly after the preface. We have been huffing and puffing to write compelling words about Leo, but the quotes from Leo's users are truly great stuff. To summarize: I am content with a *slightly* more technical intro on the web page, and with the new link there to the preface. The preface has provocative words (as it should!) and is followed by truly great words from users in a variety of authentic voices. If all this doesn't get the job done, then I am willing to say that it can't be done. I welcome further suggestions, but I would prefer *actual* testimonials as in http://leoeditor.com/preliminaries.html#what-people-are-saying-about-leoto soporific generalities :-) Edward P.S. This probably concludes most of the writing and reorganization of the docs. Still to do: adding more links and adding index-related markup. EKR -- You received this message because you are subscribed to the Google Groups "leo-editor" group. To unsubscribe from this group and stop receiving emails from it, send an email to [email protected]. To post to this group, send email to [email protected]. Visit this group at http://groups.google.com/group/leo-editor. For more options, visit https://groups.google.com/groups/opt_out.
