I'd recommend putting the two links (why leo is special/learn leo in two hours) directly above the Furthermore points.
Seth On Fri, Oct 18, 2013 at 12:04 PM, Edward K. Ream <[email protected]> wrote: > On Thu, Oct 17, 2013 at 5:51 PM, Fidel N <[email protected]> wrote: >> >> Hey Edward, this is a small brainstorm, nothing too elaborated, but >> hopefully can give you any idea you could use for that. > > > Thanks for this. It might be effective in an external article about Leo, > but I don't know where it find a place on Leo's web site. > > After thinking about all the issues, I have decided to make minimal changes > as follows: > > Home page tells just a bit more about Leo, and in a *slightly* more > technical way. The new words are at: http://leoeditor.com/ There is even a > stealthy link to DAGs. > > The home page has a new link, "Learn why Leo is special", to a resuscitated > preface: http://leoeditor.com/preliminaries.html#preface The preface is a > great opportunity to give the big picture, without having to explain every > little thing. It's a teaser. It's much better, imo, than long-winded > explanations, such as the old "Leo in a nutshell". > > Even better, the "What people are saying about Leo" sections > http://leoeditor.com/preliminaries.html#what-people-are-saying-about-leo > follow directly after the preface. We have been huffing and puffing to write > compelling words about Leo, but the quotes from Leo's users are truly great > stuff. > > To summarize: > > I am content with a *slightly* more technical intro on the web page, and > with the new link there to the preface. The preface has provocative words > (as it should!) and is followed by truly great words from users in a > variety of authentic voices. > > If all this doesn't get the job done, then I am willing to say that it can't > be done. > > I welcome further suggestions, but I would prefer *actual* testimonials as > in http://leoeditor.com/preliminaries.html#what-people-are-saying-about-leo > to soporific generalities :-) > > Edward > > P.S. This probably concludes most of the writing and reorganization of the > docs. Still to do: adding more links and adding index-related markup. > > EKR > > -- > You received this message because you are subscribed to the Google Groups > "leo-editor" group. > To unsubscribe from this group and stop receiving emails from it, send an > email to [email protected]. > To post to this group, send email to [email protected]. > Visit this group at http://groups.google.com/group/leo-editor. > For more options, visit https://groups.google.com/groups/opt_out. -- You received this message because you are subscribed to the Google Groups "leo-editor" group. To unsubscribe from this group and stop receiving emails from it, send an email to [email protected]. To post to this group, send email to [email protected]. Visit this group at http://groups.google.com/group/leo-editor. For more options, visit https://groups.google.com/groups/opt_out.
