Hi Dhruv,

Thanks for your support and comments. We’ll address these in the next revision.

Thanks,
Acee

From: Dhruv Dhody <[email protected]>
Date: Friday, June 24, 2022 at 1:30 AM
To: Christian Hopps <[email protected]>
Cc: "[email protected]" <[email protected]>, "[email protected]" 
<[email protected]>, "[email protected]" 
<[email protected]>, "[email protected]" <[email protected]>
Subject: Re: [Lsr] WG last call for draft-ietf-lsr-ospf-terminology-00
Resent-From: <[email protected]>
Resent-To: Acee Lindem <[email protected]>, <[email protected]>, 
<[email protected]>
Resent-Date: Friday, June 24, 2022 at 1:30 AM

Hi WG,

I support progressing this towards publication.

Some comments -

- The header and main body claim that 7 RFCs are being updated whereas the 
abstract and introduction only cite two.
- It is good to add an informational reference for inclusive language in the 
introduction -- may be NISTIR8366 (which is referred to in the IESG statement 
on inclusive language)

Thanks!
Dhruv


On Sun, Jun 5, 2022 at 3:25 PM Christian Hopps 
<[email protected]<mailto:[email protected]>> wrote:
Given the simplicity of this document and having received no objections or 
edits prior to or during the adoption call we'll be moving it immediately to 
WGLC...

This begins a 2 week WG Last Call, ending Jun 19th, 2022, for:

  https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-lsr-ospf-terminology/

Authors,

  Please indicate to the list, your knowledge of any IPR related to this work.

Thanks,
Chris.


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