> -----Original Message----- > From: [email protected] [mailto:[email protected]] On Behalf Of > Alessandro Vesely > Sent: Tuesday, December 06, 2011 12:50 AM > To: Hilda Fontana > Cc: [email protected] > Subject: Re: [marf] [apps-discuss] APPSDIR review of > draft-ietf-marf-authfailure-report-05 > > On 05/Dec/11 18:24, Hilda Fontana wrote: > > ... an extension report type to ARF > > affecting multiple entries for use in reporting messages that fail one > > or more authentication checks performed on receipt of a message... > > > > would that work? > > Excuse me if this question is trivial, but doesn't the verb "to report > a message" imply that the message was received? This is also present > in the current wording: > > reporting messages that fail one or more authentication checks > performed on receipt of a message > > Would "performed on their reception" be grammatically better?
"to report a message" indicates intent, and "on receipt of a message" states clearly when it is intended that this be used. Otherwise, you could report a message long after receipt occurs (for some reason). If we're really keen to common factor the language, we could use: "...an extension report type to ARF, affecting multiple registries, for use in generating receipt-time reports about messages that fail one or more email authentication checks." _______________________________________________ marf mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/marf
