Hi Alessandro,
At 04:38 29-12-2011, Alessandro Vesely wrote:
Sections 6 and 7 are dedicated to solicited feedback.  However, there
is a number of points that should be valid also for unsolicited
reports.  If the order is not important, the common points could be
put in a common section.  Specifically, for the sending part, Section
6, here's the points I think should be common and why:

It's the beginning of the year. I have some difficulty understanding what changes you suggested.

the provided ARF fields.  This concept needs to be stated, though.
The beginning of the third paragraph of Section 8 can be changed so as
to read like so:

 Recipients of unsolicited ARF reports SHOULD, in general, handle them
 the same way as any other abuse reports.  However, they can take
 advantage of the ARF format to automate processing.  Lacking [etc.]

I don't understand what change you are asking for as there is such text in Section 8. Could you ask the editor of the document to generate a revision with your changes as it would be easier to read and comment?

BTW, as this draft is about an applicability statement, I would expect it to be clear about how the technical specifications it references should be used. Text such as "Provider generating the reports SHOULD NOT assume that the operator receiving" is more of an assumption that the key word will "make things happen" than some requirement that will help in the deployment of the specifications.

In my opinion, the document needs much more work to be ready for a Last Call.

Thanks,
-sm
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