> -----Original Message-----
> From: [email protected] [mailto:[email protected]] On Behalf Of 
> Shmuel Metz
> Sent: Friday, February 03, 2012 8:53 AM
> To: [email protected]
> Subject: Re: [marf] Working Group Last Call on draft-ietf-marf-as-05
> 
> In <[email protected]>, on
> 02/02/2012
>    at 12:35 PM, Steve Atkins <[email protected]> said:
> 
> >I'm not against using ARF for unsolicited reports, I'm against sending
> >unsolicited reports that aren't actionable by the recipient.
> 
> I'd suggest changing MAY to SHOULD in item 11 of 8.  Generating and
> Handling Unsolicited Reports.
> 
>    11.  This is, however, not universally true.  Anyone sending
>         unsolicited reports in ARF format can legitimately presume
>         that some recipients will not be able to see the ARF
>         metadata (e.g., those elements present in the second part of
>         the report), and instead SHOULD include all information
>         needed in the human readable (first, text/plain) section of
>         the report.  Further, they MAY ensure that the report is
>         readable when viewed as plain text, to give low-end
>         ticketing systems as much assistance as possible.  Finally,
>         they need to be aware that the report could be discarded or
>         ignored due to failure to take these steps in the
>         most extreme cases.
> 
> I fixed a couple of nits in the above; adding "some" and changing an
> inappropriate "i.e." to "e.g.". I'm not sure whether the second MAY
> should also be SHOULD.

Agree with the "some".

I think if you're going to change the first MAY to SHOULD, changing the second 
also makes sense.  I agree with it, since interoperability is the goal, so I've 
made the change, but of course consensus could disagree.

"i.e." is correct rather than "e.g."; "i.e." means "that is", which is more 
appropriate here than "e.g." which means "for example".  What's in parentheses 
there is precise, not an example.

Thanks,
-MSK
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