Hi Drew
Le 2011-05-24 11:26, drew a écrit :
Hi,
Alright, I really thought this was a subject worth a flyer (brochure) so
took another pass and this time pushed it to the wiki, not close to done
- NEED lots of feedback form everyone..I think it should make sense as
to what the subject is..
I've added the text, mostly unchanged, from Italo's blog post on the
timed release model - BTW.
http://wiki.documentfoundation.org/File:LibO-Pamphlet-platforms-support.pdf
or for the ODF file...
http://wiki.documentfoundation.org/File:LibO-Pamphlet-platforms-support.odt
Thanks
Drew
Nice! Here are my comments:
Maybe in p.1 panel 1 "Operating System Distributions - User
Supported->To name but a few" we could add something like "Check your
distribution packager for native availability of LibreOffice" or
something like this. Or some statement that LibreOffice may be already
available through user's distro packager.
BTW ... I would probably move p.1 panel 2 to p.2 panel 2. Reason: p.2
panel 1 lists the modules, so, it would seem to make sense to then have
the modules' description on the very next panel.
p.1 panel 1 ... bottom. Is there anyway to fade the motif a little more?
I find reading the text a little difficult to read.
p.1 panel 1 ... the titles are off-set on the left-hand from the regular
text but not the same on all of the pamphlet. I prefer the left-flush
look rather than off-setting the titles. I think it looks more
professional. Just my take.
BTW ... I am not sure if I like the dark black outline around the
letters in the titles. It looks like a try at 3-D but the effect is not
working. I like the look of a softer line such as the LibreOffice tm on
p.1 panel 3.
p. 2 panel 2 ... small correction: "LibreOffice is thez" <-- remove the
"z". Also the Libre in "LibreOffice" is larger than "office"
p. 2 panel 2 ... I like the "LibreOffice uses a time based release
schedule" ... maybe shorten up the title to "LibreOffice Time Based
Release Schedule". I would also steer away from mentioning OOo. There is
no need to do this anymore. OOo is no longer a consideration and most
people will have had no idea that OOo was not on a time base release
schedule. Better, if we could provide a windows software example being
developed on a "time based release schedule" (I don't know if Firefox or
Chrome fit this ... I think Firefox does) -- KDE and Gnome really don't
mean anything to our Windows users which are the majority of our users.
Thanks for doing this.
Cheers
Marc
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