On Tue, 2011-05-24 at 14:20 -0400, Marc Paré wrote: > Hi Drew > > Le 2011-05-24 11:26, drew a écrit : > > > > > Hi, > > > > Alright, I really thought this was a subject worth a flyer (brochure) so > > took another pass and this time pushed it to the wiki, not close to done > > - NEED lots of feedback form everyone..I think it should make sense as > > to what the subject is.. > > > > I've added the text, mostly unchanged, from Italo's blog post on the > > timed release model - BTW. > >
Hi Marc, et al Pushed new copies to the wiki just now http://wiki.documentfoundation.org/File:LibO-Pamphlet-platforms-support.pdf or for the ODF file... http://wiki.documentfoundation.org/File:LibO-Pamphlet-platforms-support.odt > Nice! Here are my comments: > > Maybe in p.1 panel 1 "Operating System Distributions - User > Supported->To name but a few" we could add something like "Check your > distribution packager for native availability of LibreOffice" or > something like this. Or some statement that LibreOffice may be already > available through user's distro packager. missed that one in this drop... > > BTW ... I would probably move p.1 panel 2 to p.2 panel 2. Reason: p.2 > panel 1 lists the modules, so, it would seem to make sense to then have > the modules' description on the very next panel. Likely correct, but I would go further - the entire flow is, IMO, off...but didn't address that this go around. > > p.1 panel 1 ... bottom. Is there anyway to fade the motif a little more? > I find reading the text a little difficult to read. Done > > p.1 panel 1 ... the titles are off-set on the left-hand from the regular > text but not the same on all of the pamphlet. I prefer the left-flush > look rather than off-setting the titles. I think it looks more > professional. Just my take. Done - oddest thing, then the body text slid a little to the right...huh *smile* > > BTW ... I am not sure if I like the dark black outline around the > letters in the titles. It looks like a try at 3-D but the effect is not > working. I like the look of a softer line such as the LibreOffice tm on > p.1 panel 3. OK - > > p. 2 panel 2 ... small correction: "LibreOffice is thez" <-- remove the > "z". Also the Libre in "LibreOffice" is larger than "office" thanks > > p. 2 panel 2 ... I like the "LibreOffice uses a time based release > schedule" ... maybe shorten up the title to "LibreOffice Time Based > Release Schedule". I would also steer away from mentioning OOo. There is > no need to do this anymore. OOo is no longer a consideration and most > people will have had no idea that OOo was not on a time base release > schedule. Better, if we could provide a windows software example being > developed on a "time based release schedule" (I don't know if Firefox or > Chrome fit this ... I think Firefox does) -- KDE and Gnome really don't > mean anything to our Windows users which are the majority of our users. re-worded for this..see the first three paragraphs in that section for changes //drew -- Unsubscribe instructions: E-mail to [email protected] Posting guidelines + more: http://wiki.documentfoundation.org/Netiquette List archive: http://listarchives.libreoffice.org/www/marketing/ All messages sent to this list will be publicly archived and cannot be deleted
