On Thu, Dec 13, 2012 at 3:20 PM, Simonas Leleiva
<[email protected]> wrote:
> Oki, yet another revision, I'm happy with that :) Are you fellows? :) (/me
> likes the way of putting a logical stop to an action by asking if everyone
> is happy with it :))
> Completely agree with Sivang: we'll adjust it as we start getting actual
> reaction on social sites.
>
> But the bleeding parts I addressed in the current version below are:
> * "Mer -can- power a vast range of devices", it doesn't power e.g. smart TVs
> atm (yet ;)) - this disperses first confusion of a non-geek reader (see my
> prev email)
> * "Become a -developer- and enjoy". Nemo is still not for end-users, and
> putting it on your tablet requires you to be a developer (and how!) -
> disperses second confusion
> * Invented a verb "to Nemo-power sth", think it's comprehensible
> * Added IRC link, for those who think #nemomobile is a hashtag :)
>
> Here it goes:
>
> NemoMobile
>
>
> The future of mobile is in our hands - today.
> Presenting Linux operating system for your mobile!

Linux for your mobile.

>
> Feature rich. Free and open source. First of its kind.
>
> At the heart of NemoMobile runs the lightweight Linux distro (called Mer),
> which can power a vast range of devices: from interactive alarm clocks to
> car entertainment systems and smart TVs.

The heart of NemoMobile is a lightweight Linux distro called Mer. It
can power ... [rest is good]


>
> Become a developer and enjoy. Nemo-power your mobile phone, tablet, LCD
> shopping list on your fridge, ... , and share the experience! If you mold it
> to make tea, invite us! The more users the merrier. The more feedback the
> better.

Become a NemoMobile developer and enjoy. [Rest is good...Nemo-power -
nice. It's already stipulated that the reader is a developer.]

>
> It's pure fun, and we're one of the friendliest open-source communities
> you've ever met. Excited? So are we -- join us at
> irc://freenode.net/#nemomobile or leave a comment here and lets influence
> the future of mobile, together!
>

It's fun, and we're friendly. We're excited. If you're interested,
join us ... leave a comment here. Let's influence the future of
mobile, together!

[It's not always fun, let alone pure fun. one of the friendliest ...
sounds like too much. Seems like hype.]

The progress is excellent. I think that it would help to get into the
perspective of a developer who is coming new to the project and even
to open source. Is this message what you would respond to in those
circumstances?

Carl

>
> --
> Was playing with Nemo on N9, now looks and feels really great, as my UK SIM
> cards started to work, and N9 performs really fast now! (L2 cache enabling
> bug fixed!)
>
> Will start to make nice screenshots and video casts (also one user luring is
> missing: ringtones still do not work! I'm looking into the status of that,
> bug NEMO#593)
>
> Can't wait for first logos and cover photos from you ! :)
>
>
> Cheers,
> Simonas
>
> On 12 December 2012 22:31, Sivan Greenberg <[email protected]> wrote:
>>
>>
>>
>>
>> On Wed, Dec 12, 2012 at 10:53 PM, Simonas Leleiva
>> <[email protected]> wrote:
>>>
>>> We quite often mentioned a phrase "easier to understand for non-geeks" in
>>> this thread.
>>>
>>> Are we targetting tech-inclined gadget-lovers? (but non-geeks hence not
>>> necessarily developers)
>>>
>>> If so, here's the reaction of one of them (current text is perfect for
>>> geeks though):
>>>
>>>> NemoMobile
>>>>
>>>> The future of mobile is in our hands - today.
>>>> Presenting Linux operating system for your mobile!
>>>
>>> Mobile = phone, springs to mind.
>>>
>>>>
>>>> Feature rich. Free and open source. First of its kind.
>>>
>>> OMG!
>>>
>>>> NemoMobile is based on the lightweight Mer Linux core which enables a
>>>> vast range of devices: from interactive alarm clocks to car entertainment
>>>> systems and smart TVs.
>>>
>>> Possible interpretations (both disregard the 'Mer' as an irrelevant bit,
>>> never heard of, why another term?):
>>> * So it runs on all of them already! Cool!
>>> * Wow, I can interact with my alarm clock on my phone, or put my phone
>>> with Nemo into a car and it will entertain me, or wow watch TV on my Nemo
>>> powered phone!!
>>>
>>>> Become a user and enjoy. Try it on your mobile phone, tablet, LCD
>>>> shopping list on your fridge, ... , and tell us how it went!
>>>
>>> Try? You want me to test it? So no-one else has done this before? So it
>>> is not a mature product? "How it went"? You mean it most probably will fail?
>>> But at the beginning you wrote that it runs on a vast range of devices!
>>> Means it's I cannot use it as my daily phone? Please state that explicitly
>>> in first paragraphs, as you are raising false expectations.
>>>
>>
>>
>> as mentioned before : "Try it on your mobile phone, tablet, LCD shopping
>> list on your fridge, ... , and share the experience!" revised to:
>>
>> "Use it to power your mobile phone, tablet, LCD shopping list on your
>> fridge, ... , and share the experience!"
>>
>>
>>>>
>>>> If you mold it to make tea, invite us!
>>>
>>> ?????? (Obviously that person never heard about that Qt coffee making
>>> demo, so didn't another vast majority of actual geeks/devs, too. Even those
>>> with Qt experience might have never heard of coffee/tea demos)
>>
>>
>>
>> I wanted this to breathe curiosity in prospect users / community members,
>> so they'd go and google for stuff and find out for themselves. But perhaps
>> this does not fit in here? Also, having a computer make coffee and so, is
>> one of the single oldest use cases that has been accompanying the industry
>> almost since its beginning:
>>
>> "One of the most memorable comments about software ever said is whether
>>   this or that piece of code can make coffee. Coffee is a world commod­
>>   ity that is second only to oil. Linux DOES make coffee; and it tastes
>>   good as well!"
>> taken from http://www.tldp.org/HOWTO/text/Coffee
>>
>> I guess this might apply for coders mostly, still it might be a good way
>> to engage those who are not to become ones?
>>
>>>
>>>
>>>>
>>>> The more users the merrier. The more feedback the better.
>>>
>>>
>>>
>>>> It's pure fun, and we're one of the friendliest open-source communities
>>>> you've ever met. Excited? So are we -- join us on #[email protected]
>>>> or leave a comment here and lets influence the future of mobile, together!
>>>
>>> Ok, but you raised my interest only to reveal the not-so-cool true
>>> reality.
>>> I have real doubts now about starting to learn to program and delve into
>>> Nemo, because as I go I feel I might be mislead in my journey once again..
>>>
>>>
>>>
>>> So, either we intend attract geeks, or need to revise the text :)
>>>
>>
>> I'm thinking we should get done with it as well, and check what's with the
>> graphics ;) we can always revise later if we see the text does not server
>> us? list feedback ? :)
>>
>>
>> -Sivan
>
>


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