Checked out the update on the pad. Looks very good!

quixote.

On 12/16/2012 04:06 PM, Sivan Greenberg wrote:
So, I've updated it in the pad. I think we're good to go, sledges and list?

http://openetherpad.org/urfxx467L6

-Sivan


On Mon, Dec 17, 2012 at 1:56 AM, Sivan Greenberg <[email protected] <mailto:[email protected]>> wrote:




    On Mon, Dec 17, 2012 at 1:25 AM, Simonas Leleiva
    <[email protected] <mailto:[email protected]>> wrote:


        { And thanks to a mysterious unnamed someone who changed
        "mold" into
        "get" :) Yes, my non biased proof-reader also did not want mold in
        their tea :D }

    +1


        NemoMobile


The future of mobile computing is in our hands - today.
    (sounds too long to me compared to the original, was just the
    'computing' word added?)...


        Presenting Linux for your mobile.

        Feature rich. Free and open source. First of its kind.

        The heart of NemoMobile is a lightweight Linux distro called
        Mer. It
        can power a wide range of devices: from interactive alarm
        clocks to
        car entertainment systems and smart TVs.


    Now this seems to say much more about Mer, but if I'm just
    arriving I'll ask "So what's that NemoMobile??".  Also, heart can
    be interested differently by different developers / landers on the
    page.


        Become a NemoMobile developer and enjoy the freedom.
        Nemo-power your
        mobile phone, tablet, LCD shopping list on your fridge, ... , and
        share the experience! If you get it to make tea, invite us!
        The more


    -> Nemo power again to the uninitiated could be a bit problematic,
    so again I'd suggest 'Use it to power your mobile phone,....,'.
    -> "if you got it to make tea,.."

        users the merrier. The more feedback the better.

        It's fun, we're excited and a friendly community. Interested?
        Join us
        at IRC http://webchat.freenode.net/?channels=#nemomobile or
        leave a
        comment here. Let's influence the future of mobile, together!


    'It's fun and we're a friendly community. " should be better.
    (drop the excitement altogether)
    -Sivan




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-Sivan


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