So, I've updated it in the pad. I think we're good to go, sledges and list?
http://openetherpad.org/urfxx467L6 -Sivan On Mon, Dec 17, 2012 at 1:56 AM, Sivan Greenberg <si...@omniqueue.com>wrote: > > > > On Mon, Dec 17, 2012 at 1:25 AM, Simonas Leleiva < > simonas.lele...@gmail.com> wrote: > >> >> { And thanks to a mysterious unnamed someone who changed "mold" into >> "get" :) Yes, my non biased proof-reader also did not want mold in >> their tea :D } >> >> +1 > >> >> NemoMobile >> >> >> The future of mobile computing is in our hands - today. > > > (sounds too long to me compared to the original, was just the 'computing' > word added?)... > >> >> Presenting Linux for your mobile. >> >> Feature rich. Free and open source. First of its kind. >> >> The heart of NemoMobile is a lightweight Linux distro called Mer. It >> can power a wide range of devices: from interactive alarm clocks to >> car entertainment systems and smart TVs. >> > > Now this seems to say much more about Mer, but if I'm just arriving I'll > ask "So what's that NemoMobile??". Also, heart can > be interested differently by different developers / landers on the page. > >> >> Become a NemoMobile developer and enjoy the freedom. Nemo-power your >> mobile phone, tablet, LCD shopping list on your fridge, ... , and >> share the experience! If you get it to make tea, invite us! The more >> > > -> Nemo power again to the uninitiated could be a bit problematic, so > again I'd suggest 'Use it to power your mobile phone,....,'. > -> "if you got it to make tea,.." > >> users the merrier. The more feedback the better. >> >> It's fun, we're excited and a friendly community. Interested? Join us >> at IRC http://webchat.freenode.net/?channels=#nemomobile or leave a >> comment here. Let's influence the future of mobile, together! >> >> > 'It's fun and we're a friendly community. " should be better. (drop > the excitement altogether) > > -Sivan > -- -Sivan
