On Thu, 12 Jul 2007 22:26:19 -0400
"Timothy Normand Miller" <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote:

> I've been through a fair amount of revision on the speech since last
> time.  I haven't posted, because I wanted to reach a point of
> stability before I begged again for help.  Here is where you can find
> it:

Some notes:

#1: should mention the date and occasion of the talk (for later reference)
#2: Reimar's name is written "Döffinger" with an ö and not oe.
    Though oe is the official transliteration if an ö isn't present,
    it shouldn't be needed when using electronic means of the 21st century
#3: The outline is still a little bit small :)
#4: Wording (mainly missing verbs)
    "Few graphics cards without proprietary drivers available
    on the market (stability and security issues)"
    "3D graphics drivers not available on every plattform"
#7: _100_ Free I/O signals...
    PCI ([EMAIL PROTECTED], [EMAIL PROTECTED] compatible)
#10: high-yield is IMHO not understandable for people not familiar
     with chip production. So IMHO "fast, simple, affordable" is enough.
#11: "Currenlty software model written in C available"

One question that will for sure arrise is "When?", so you
should prepare answers to the most important milestones (OGD1, OGA1, TRV10...)

                        Attila Kinali

-- 
Praised are the Fountains of Shelieth, the silver harp of the waters,
But blest in my name forever this stream that stanched my thirst!
                         -- Deed of Morred
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