On Wed, Nov 12, 2008 at 1:55 PM, David Vuorio <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote: > Timothy Normand Miller wrote: >> >> Thanks for the edits. I have tried to incorporate your ideas into the >> announcement, but I think it still needs a little more work before >> it's finished. I think the paragraphing should be changed a bit. Let >> me know what you think: > > English is my second language, but as far as I can tell I'm happy with this > version.
I don't speak a word of Swedish, do don't feel bad. :) (I'm assuming based on the .se TLD that you are from Sweden.) > > I think it could help to have something like "open graphics card" or "open > graphics platform" in the title somehow. I suspect no one knows what OGA1 > is, so perhaps this shouldn't be in the title but just referenced as a > codename in the text. Perhaps: > > "Open Graphics Project releases OGA1 0.5 beta" Good idea. I picked this one. -- Timothy Normand Miller http://www.cse.ohio-state.edu/~millerti Open Graphics Project _______________________________________________ Open-graphics mailing list [email protected] http://lists.duskglow.com/mailman/listinfo/open-graphics List service provided by Duskglow Consulting, LLC (www.duskglow.com)
