Alejandro,

Thanks for the comments.  You may be right that cloning out the figure
on the left may improve the photo.  I personally am not one to do much
manipulation like that unless it is for a paying client who wants
something specific (much like the case we were talking about with
Paul's recent portrait).  I think Shel's observation about a shallower
DOF would have been reasonable on this one.  But the fleeting moment
didn't give me much time to work in.

Thanks for taking the time to look and comment.

-- 
Best regards,
Bruce


Tuesday, June 1, 2004, 11:51:12 AM, you wrote:

jwc> I agree with Shel in that a charming moment is caught.  I also like the
jwc> composition.  Great shot!

jwc> I would probably erase the guy with the khakhi shorts, white socks, and
jwc> white shirt holding a water bottle with his arms crossed.  Is that too much
jwc> detail?  ;)  In his place I would plant grass.  How about if he was burned
jwc> in just a tad?  Sure it's digital manipulation, but what digital image
jwc> isn't?  :D

jwc> I'm afraid I can't comment in digicams and their DOF.

jwc> Saludos!

jwc> Alejandro




jwc> ---------- Original Message -----------
jwc> From: "Shel Belinkoff" <[EMAIL PROTECTED]>
jwc> To: [EMAIL PROTECTED]
jwc> Sent: Tue, 1 Jun 2004 10:09:46 -0700
jwc> Subject: RE: PAW:  Father/son

>> I like that one, Bruce.  It catches a nice moment ;-))
>> 
>> One of the things I'm starting to notice with the pentax, and some other
>> DSLR's, is the excessive DOF that sometimes encroaches on what might
>> otherwise be an excellent or exceptional photograph.  I'm not specifically
>> criticizing your pic, and I'm not sure I'm even criticizing the way these
>> digi cameras work, especially with lenses that don't provide particularly
>> shallow DOF to begin with, however, it's an observation that your pic
>> motivated comment upon.  Personally, I'd have liked a little less sharpness
>> from the guy in the back, yet it doesn't always seem possible to control
>> the DOF on the shallow end with these cameras. I'd love to hear some
>> comments about this.
>> 
>> Shel Belinkoff
>> 
>> > [Original Message]
>> > From: Bruce Dayton <[EMAIL PROTECTED]>
>> 
>> > Taken at a baseball game.  *istD, Tamron 28-75/2.8 DI.
>> >
>> > Here's the link:
>> > http://www.daytonphoto.com/PAW/imgp5903.htm
>> >
>> >
>> > Bruce
jwc> ------- End of Original Message -------


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