I see what you're trying to do, or at least I feel it, but there are
too many distracting elements in this photograph to really make it
work.
First there's the motorcycle that shows in the distance between the
two people. Did you notice it when making the shot? It takes away
from the feel of the scene, as does the light pole on the right.
The trees on the left and the open sky on the right make the
photograph feel off balance. Perhaps being in closer with a wider
lens might have helped. Also, there seems to be some sort of white,
rectangular structure in the background that seems to be "growing"
out of the woman's right shoulder - another distraction.
This is the kind of photo where less detail would offer more
impact. Here's a simple, quick crop without the light pole.
http://home.earthlink.net/~belinkoff/tomorrow2.jpg
What do you think?
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Sheldon Belinkoff
CREATURE'S COMFORT
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