I don't think you needed to smooth her skin, the contrast seems to be fine at least for the net. All in all it's very good.

Fred Widall wrote:

http://www.photo.net/photodb/photo?photo_id=2793927

I'm trying to improve my protrait technique and I offer up this
image for critique.

Shot with my Ricohmatic 225 on Agfa APX 100 film. Developed in Rodinal
(1:100 for 60 mins) & scanned on my Epson 3170. Heavily cropped in PS7
with contrast & levels adjusted.

I like the pose and the tight cropping but I think I overdid the
increase in contrast a little - some detail in her hair has been
lost. I tried smoothing her skin texture by using a blurred second
layer but it looked very artifical so I've left it alone.

Comments ???

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