Patrick Genovese wrote: > I love the expression and the diagonal composition, This shot has a lot > going for it. > > IMHO there are c couple of small tweaks that could improve the picture: > > 1. clone out the background out of focus highlights near the top left > and right corners. > 2. darken the background > 3. not sure about this but worth a try, Clone out the strand of hair > crossing her left eye. > > Patrick
annsan adds: Number 3 is the key - I want to reach out and brush it away :) Nice expression, her beauty is real and you captured it without a lot of hoopla I wouldn't want to see too much manipulation, but that little strand if hair is distracting. ann

