Patrick Genovese wrote:

> I love the expression and the diagonal composition, This shot has a lot
> going for it.
>
> IMHO there are c couple of small tweaks that could improve the picture:
>
> 1.  clone out the background out of focus highlights near the top left
> and right corners.
> 2. darken the background
> 3. not sure about this but worth a try,  Clone out the strand of hair
> crossing her left eye.
>
> Patrick

annsan adds:

Number 3 is the key - I want to reach out and brush it away :)
Nice expression, her beauty is real and you captured it without a lot of
hoopla
 I wouldn't want to see too much manipulation, but that little strand if
hair is distracting.

ann


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