As usually from you: Very good use of DOF, beautiful colours. You have also made most out of the light (as usually).
But: As you already probably are aware of; there is some vegetation disturbing the impact of the birds. Second but: The tail is cut of. I know, "it was the best you could do with the circumstances". But, it doesn't make it a strong composition IMO. How about cutting of about an inch? First, it would make the dominating bird less centred, second it could make a feeling of movement. Tim Mostly harmless (just plain Norwegian) Never underestimate the power of stupidity in large crowds (Very freely after Arthur C. Clarke, or some other clever guy) > -----Original Message----- > From: Bruce Dayton [mailto:[EMAIL PROTECTED] > Sent: 14. november 2005 19:34 > To: [email protected] > Subject: PESO - Raptors? > > Out walking with the long lens this morning. I came across a flock of > wild turkeys. I was just a little downhill from them and was trying > not to spook them. I got a bunch of shots - all through a few weeds. > When I watched this pair move along I couldn't help but think about > the Velociraptors moving about together. The movements were quite > startling to watch. > > Not one of my best shots, but the best that I could do with the > circumstances. > > Pentax *istD, Tokina AT-X 400/5.6 > ISO 400, 1/750 sec @ f/6.7 > > http://www.daytonphoto.com/PAW/bkd_2508.htm > > Comments welcome > > -- > Bruce >

