As usually from you: Very good use of DOF, beautiful colours. You have also
made most out of the light (as usually). 

But: As you already probably are aware of; there is some vegetation
disturbing the impact of the birds.

Second but: The tail is cut of. I know, "it was the best you could do with
the circumstances". But, it doesn't make it a strong composition IMO. How
about cutting of about an inch? First, it would make the dominating bird
less centred, second it could make a feeling of movement. 


Tim
Mostly harmless (just plain Norwegian)
 
Never underestimate the power of stupidity in large crowds 
(Very freely after Arthur C. Clarke, or some other clever guy)

> -----Original Message-----
> From: Bruce Dayton [mailto:[EMAIL PROTECTED]
> Sent: 14. november 2005 19:34
> To: [email protected]
> Subject: PESO - Raptors?
> 
> Out walking with the long lens this morning.  I came across a flock of
> wild turkeys.  I was just a little downhill from them and was trying
> not to spook them.  I got a bunch of shots - all through a few weeds.
> When I watched this pair move along I couldn't help but think about
> the Velociraptors moving about together.  The movements were quite
> startling to watch.
> 
> Not one of my best shots, but the best that I could do with the
> circumstances.
> 
> Pentax *istD, Tokina AT-X 400/5.6
> ISO 400, 1/750 sec @ f/6.7
> 
> http://www.daytonphoto.com/PAW/bkd_2508.htm
> 
> Comments welcome
> 
> --
> Bruce
> 



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