frank theriault <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote:

>On 1/25/06, frank theriault <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote:
>> On 1/24/06, Shel Belinkoff <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote:
>> > Neither do I.  Would you like to know why?
>>
>> Not really...
>
>But, seriously, Shel (I was only joking around - I'm always interested
>to hear your thoughts), I'll tell you why I don't really like it:
>
>It's that second dog behind the first one.  It obscures the child's
>face.  Had it not been there, and one could see just the child's
>profile and the "main" dog, I think it would have been okay.  Or, had
>I been able to move a bit, so that one could see the child's face
>perhaps from a front 3/4 view (so that we could see a bit more of his
>face), I think this one might have had a chance of working.
>
>But, as is, the child/dog interaction is just to muddled and hard to see.
>
>This was a one-shot deal.  I waited for several minutes to see if the
>child and dog(s) would do anything interesting, but it didn't happen.
>
>I hoped from looking at the neg that this one might turn out, but once
>I saw the 8x10 I knew I missed it.  But, since I spent the money on
>getting the print, I figured I'd post it, just to see what (if
>anything) others had to say.
>
>Am I close to what you may think, Shel (or anyone else, for that matter...)?

I think I agree with your analysis, for the most part. (I do like the
bicycle in the background, though.)

Perhaps you should change the title to "One Dog Too Many"? ;-)
 
 
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Mark Roberts
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