Hmm... the blank verse message and the photo indicate you were feeling a bit low.
Anyway... I like the composition, but the photo would be a lot stronger if everything were within the DOF. The OOF thick stick, in particular, is distracting. Rick --- Godfrey DiGiorgi <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote: > Back to Baylands today to eat > my lunch by the water. > Gulls flocked to wait for crumbs. > Steel gray sky on water. > They got nothing. > Made a few photos. > > > http://homepage.mac.com/ramarren/photo/PAW7/48b.htm > > Comments and critique always appreciated. > > enjoy > Godfrey > > -- > PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List > [email protected] > http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net > to UNSUBSCRIBE from the PDML, please visit the link > directly above and follow the directions. > ____________________________________________________________________________________ Never miss a thing. Make Yahoo your home page. http://www.yahoo.com/r/hs -- PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List [email protected] http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net to UNSUBSCRIBE from the PDML, please visit the link directly above and follow the directions.
