Godfrey,
Better, I like the concept, but still not good.
Regards,  Bob S.

On Nov 29, 2007 4:41 PM, Godfrey DiGiorgi <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote:
> LOL ... I don't know why, but this photo appeals to me a lot. So I
> did some more editing on it ... ;-)
>
>    http://homepage.mac.com/ramarren/photo/PAW7/48b.htm
>
> Removing the reed does nothing for me. Tried that, saw someone else
> try it, and it loses that which I like about the image: the sense of
> two similar scenes in one, overlapping, one in and one out of focus.
>
> I softened up the large reed at the rear quite a lot, and its
> reflection a bit more, mottling them just a little bit to be closer
> to the weight of the other out of focus reeds near it. It's
> definitely the best of the renderings to my eye.
>
> So I'm waiting for the tomatoes to fly ... Have at it! :-)
>
> enjoy
> Godfrey
>
> On Nov 29, 2007, at 10:18 AM, Boris Liberman wrote:
>
> > I have to join those voices who commended about the bigger weed
> > on the backgroun, one that is out of focus. It is simply too big. You
> > see, the picture is extremely delicate. And this big dark hmmm
> > chunk of
> > form is really out of place here.
>
>
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