Godfrey, Better, I like the concept, but still not good. Regards, Bob S. On Nov 29, 2007 4:41 PM, Godfrey DiGiorgi <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote: > LOL ... I don't know why, but this photo appeals to me a lot. So I > did some more editing on it ... ;-) > > http://homepage.mac.com/ramarren/photo/PAW7/48b.htm > > Removing the reed does nothing for me. Tried that, saw someone else > try it, and it loses that which I like about the image: the sense of > two similar scenes in one, overlapping, one in and one out of focus. > > I softened up the large reed at the rear quite a lot, and its > reflection a bit more, mottling them just a little bit to be closer > to the weight of the other out of focus reeds near it. It's > definitely the best of the renderings to my eye. > > So I'm waiting for the tomatoes to fly ... Have at it! :-) > > enjoy > Godfrey > > On Nov 29, 2007, at 10:18 AM, Boris Liberman wrote: > > > I have to join those voices who commended about the bigger weed > > on the backgroun, one that is out of focus. It is simply too big. You > > see, the picture is extremely delicate. And this big dark hmmm > > chunk of > > form is really out of place here. > > > > -- > PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List > [email protected] > http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net > to UNSUBSCRIBE from the PDML, please visit the link directly above and follow > the directions. >
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