LOL ... I don't know why, but this photo appeals to me a lot. So I
did some more editing on it ... ;-)
http://homepage.mac.com/ramarren/photo/PAW7/48b.htm
Removing the reed does nothing for me. Tried that, saw someone else
try it, and it loses that which I like about the image: the sense of
two similar scenes in one, overlapping, one in and one out of focus.
I softened up the large reed at the rear quite a lot, and its
reflection a bit more, mottling them just a little bit to be closer
to the weight of the other out of focus reeds near it. It's
definitely the best of the renderings to my eye.
So I'm waiting for the tomatoes to fly ... Have at it! :-)
enjoy
Godfrey
On Nov 29, 2007, at 10:18 AM, Boris Liberman wrote:
> I have to join those voices who commended about the bigger weed
> on the backgroun, one that is out of focus. It is simply too big. You
> see, the picture is extremely delicate. And this big dark hmmm
> chunk of
> form is really out of place here.
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