On Sun, Feb 22, 2009 at 04:09:15PM +0900, David Savage wrote:
# The background is distracting IMO. Front to back depth isn't
# necessary. As I see it, it's the difference in colours that will make
# the shot.

My original thought was the difference in colors, but when I realized
that the outcropping was in the frame I thought it would be nice
too. I guess I was trying to do too much.

Would you focus on the red or the yellow? Which one in the foreground?

# 
# Narrower AOV & less DOF would be my suggestion.
# 
# Cheers,
# 
# Dave
# 
# 2009/2/22 Larry Colen <[email protected]>:
# > Yesterday, I took a few minutes off to wander about outside the office
# > with my K100 + DA40. I thought I'd get some shots of some recently
# > painted fire plumbing that was a very pretty shade of red. I tried
# > juxtaposing it with the bright yellow fire hydrant and the green hills
# > with a rock outcropping nearby.
# >
# > I don't feel that the shot quite worked. One thing I may try is a
# > longer lens to flatten the perspective and bring the outcropping in
# > more.  I'd greatly appreciate other suggestions of what to try to make
# > this shot work.
# >
# > http://www.flickr.com/photos/ellarsee/sets/72157614202014625/
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