It's close to working, but you have to get rid of the cars in the background. A more compact frame would help as well. Frame tighter and make it a vertical. If you must shoot when cars are present, clone them out.
Paul
On Feb 22, 2009, at 1:28 AM, Larry Colen wrote:

Yesterday, I took a few minutes off to wander about outside the office
with my K100 + DA40. I thought I'd get some shots of some recently
painted fire plumbing that was a very pretty shade of red. I tried
juxtaposing it with the bright yellow fire hydrant and the green hills
with a rock outcropping nearby.

I don't feel that the shot quite worked. One thing I may try is a
longer lens to flatten the perspective and bring the outcropping in
more.  I'd greatly appreciate other suggestions of what to try to make
this shot work.

http://www.flickr.com/photos/ellarsee/sets/72157614202014625/

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