Well, Jostein, I know I'm in the minority here, but... I like it.
You might consider a crop right down the middle of his nose, and across at the lowermost edge of his lip. That would give more emphasis to the eye and the half-smile, which is where the power of the shot is. Rick http://photo.net/photos/RickW --- On Wed, 4/8/09, AlunFoto <[email protected]> wrote: > From: AlunFoto <[email protected]> > Subject: PESO - portrait of a young man > To: "Pentax-Discuss Mail List" <[email protected]> > Date: Wednesday, April 8, 2009, 5:46 PM > Gang, > On unfamiliar ground here. Human portrait in b/w... > http://www.alunfoto.no/galleri/displayimage.php?pos=-189 > > As Boris would say, please be brutal... > > Best, > Jostein > > -- > http://www.alunfoto.no/galleri/ > http://alunfoto.blogspot.com > > -- > PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List > [email protected] > http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net > to UNSUBSCRIBE from the PDML, please visit the link > directly above and follow the directions. -- PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List [email protected] http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net to UNSUBSCRIBE from the PDML, please visit the link directly above and follow the directions.

