Well, Jostein, I know I'm in the minority here, but...

I like it.

You might consider a crop right down the middle of his nose, and across at the 
lowermost edge of his lip.  That would give more emphasis to the eye and the 
half-smile, which is where the power of the shot is.

Rick

http://photo.net/photos/RickW


--- On Wed, 4/8/09, AlunFoto <[email protected]> wrote:

> From: AlunFoto <[email protected]>
> Subject: PESO - portrait of a young man
> To: "Pentax-Discuss Mail List" <[email protected]>
> Date: Wednesday, April 8, 2009, 5:46 PM
> Gang,
> On unfamiliar ground here. Human portrait in b/w...
> http://www.alunfoto.no/galleri/displayimage.php?pos=-189
> 
> As Boris would say, please be brutal...
> 
> Best,
> Jostein
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