Thanks Rick.

Looks like the vote for less nose is unanimous (you, Christine, Bong, Bill).
The photo is uncropped as presented, so I'll look into what can be subtracted.

Cheers,
Jostein

2009/4/9 Rick Womer <[email protected]>:
>
> Well, Jostein, I know I'm in the minority here, but...
>
> I like it.
>
> You might consider a crop right down the middle of his nose, and across at 
> the lowermost edge of his lip.  That would give more emphasis to the eye and 
> the half-smile, which is where the power of the shot is.
>
> Rick
>
> http://photo.net/photos/RickW
>
>
> --- On Wed, 4/8/09, AlunFoto <[email protected]> wrote:
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>> From: AlunFoto <[email protected]>
>> Subject: PESO - portrait of a young man
>> To: "Pentax-Discuss Mail List" <[email protected]>
>> Date: Wednesday, April 8, 2009, 5:46 PM
>> Gang,
>> On unfamiliar ground here. Human portrait in b/w...
>> http://www.alunfoto.no/galleri/displayimage.php?pos=-189
>>
>> As Boris would say, please be brutal...
>>
>> Best,
>> Jostein
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