Hmmm to me the tram itself is incidental, in a way... part of a silhouette pattern... I liked the weird colors of the contraption that hauls it in the dusky light... keeping it a a silhouette is what works for me but I'll take
that parenthetical comment as a compliment :)

xo,
ann

[email protected] wrote:

In a message dated 8/25/2009 8:42:48 P.M. Pacific Daylight Time, [email protected] writes: at the place where you get on the tram from Roosevelt Island back to Manhattan - hand held and no flash tweaked a little in Elements to brighten color of yellow thingy in foreground and cropped just a wee bit on left to get rid of a glary white light.

A  friend just moved into an apartment on the island today  -

http://annsan.smugmug.com/On-the-Road-or-On-Foot/New-York-New-York/2564371_i
3HHm/1/630498772_fChvR/Large

ann
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I like the composition a lot, except... (so hard to criticize an annsan photo, heh). Well the center of interest appears to be that box car thing. On my monitor it is a black blob. Maybe you wanted it to be just a silhouette, but since my eye keeps going to it..

Bring up a tad more detail in the black blob?

Marnie aka  Doe   Could be my monitor too.  :-)


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