I believe I slightly prefer this version. The "weight" added by darkening adds to the tram's significance.
Jack --- On Wed, 8/26/09, ann sanfedele <[email protected]> wrote: > From: ann sanfedele <[email protected]> > Subject: Re: peso: tram adjusted > To: "Pentax-Discuss Mail List" <[email protected]>, "Marnie" <[email protected]> > Date: Wednesday, August 26, 2009, 11:57 AM > Actually, I really did call it TRAM > as a bit of irony -- its more about the bridge and the crazy > tramway mechanics.. > that being said ... I did make a file with Marnie's > suggestion and I think I like it... but I waffle... > I think I shouldn't name pesos... > > here is the "marnie edit' so to speak > > http://annsan.smugmug.com/Other/Stuff-to-show-PDML-for-various/4796533_saNpx/1/631009097_pThkK/Large > > at the moment it is in an unlisted gallery ... > > ann > > > > Jack Davis wrote: > > > Ann, maybe you should indicate your intended center of > interest by re-naming it; "Black Blob Tram." =) > > Structurally, very interesting. > > > > Jack > > > > --- On Wed, 8/26/09, ann sanfedele <[email protected]> > wrote: > > > > > >> From: ann sanfedele <[email protected]> > >> Subject: Re: peso: tram > >> To: "Pentax-Discuss Mail List" <[email protected]> > >> Date: Wednesday, August 26, 2009, 10:14 AM > >> Hmmm to me the tram itself is > >> incidental, in a way... part of a silhouette > pattern... I liked the weird colors of the > >> contraption that hauls it in the dusky > >> light... keeping it a a > silhouette is what works for me but I'll take > >> that parenthetical comment as a compliment :) > >> > >> xo, > >> ann > >> > >> [email protected] > >> wrote: > >> > >> > >>> In a message dated 8/25/2009 8:42:48 P.M. > Pacific > >>> > >> Daylight Time, > >>> [email protected] > >>> > >> writes: > >> > >>> at the place where you get on the tram > from > >> Roosevelt Island back to > >>> Manhattan - hand held and no flash > tweaked > >>> > >> a little > >> > >>> in Elements to brighten color of yellow thingy > in > >>> > >> foreground and cropped > >>> just a wee bit on left to get rid of a glary > white > >>> > >> light. > >> > >>> A friend just moved into an apartment on > the > >>> > >> island today - > >> > >>> http://annsan.smugmug.com/On-the-Road-or-On-Foot/New-York-New-York/2564371_i > >>> 3HHm/1/630498772_fChvR/Large > >>> > >>> ann > >>> ========= > >>> I like the composition a lot, except... > (so hard > >>> > >> to criticize an annsan > >>> photo, heh). Well the center of interest > appears > >>> > >> to be that box car thing. On > >>> my monitor it is a black blob. Maybe you > wanted > >>> > >> it to be just a > >>> silhouette, but since my eye keeps going > to it.. > >>> > >>> Bring up a tad more detail in the black blob? > >>> > >>> Marnie aka Doe Could be > my > >>> > >> monitor too. :-) > >> > >>> --------------------------------------------- > >>> We can't solve problems by using the > same kind of > >>> > >> thinking we used when we > >>> created them. Albert Einstein > >>> > >>> > >>> -- > >>> PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List > >>> [email protected] > >>> http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net > >>> to UNSUBSCRIBE from the PDML, please visit the > link > >>> > >> directly above and follow the directions. > >> > >>> > >>> > >> > >> -- > >> PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List > >> [email protected] > >> http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net > >> to UNSUBSCRIBE from the PDML, please visit the > link > >> directly above and follow the directions. > >> > >> > > > > > > > > > > -- > > PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List > > [email protected] > > http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net > > to UNSUBSCRIBE from the PDML, please visit the link > directly above and follow the directions. > > > > > > > > -- > PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List > [email protected] > http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net > to UNSUBSCRIBE from the PDML, please visit the link > directly above and follow the directions. > -- PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List [email protected] http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net to UNSUBSCRIBE from the PDML, please visit the link directly above and follow the directions.
