Well if you mean this one:

 P1040438

I'd adjust the color a bit... looks like it needs a bit of blue (well , on my bus anyway) .. and crop the top off just above the head of the guy on the left .......as the ceiling lights kinda get in the way... but she captured sweet, natural expressions and that's the most important part.

looks like a fun business event ;-)

ann

Igor Roshchin wrote:

Hi All,

My wife would like to hear what different photographers think
if this composition works or not:
http://flic.kr/p/9mbxex
She took this photo at a business event.

Second question is what would you do differently (change the
composition/crop..) - without moving/orchestrating people, - so that it would look better.

Thank you in advance for all the response,

Igor





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