It's close to working. But I think there's too much dead space at the top of 
the frame. If it was framed lower to include the fee of the two figures in the 
rear, it would work better. But I like the mix of near and far figures.
Paul
On Feb 26, 2011, at 6:01 PM, Igor Roshchin wrote:

> 
> Hi All,
> 
> My wife would like to hear what different photographers think
> if this composition works or not:
> http://flic.kr/p/9mbxex
> She took this photo at a business event.
> 
> Second question is what would you do differently (change the
> composition/crop..) - without moving/orchestrating people, - 
> so that it would look better.
> 
> Thank you in advance for all the response,
> 
> Igor
> 
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