Yes, but unfortunately, from where you're standing you have a good
composition for the barn or a good composition for the rock, but you
don't have a good composition for both. It's a photogenic rock, and
it's certainly a photogenic barn, but...
On 9/16/2014 6:57 PM, Jack Davis wrote:
Interesting. The rock isn't covering any part of the primary element. It rests
there on it's own ready to receive
your attention and blame, if you wish, by providing a bit of interest.
Jack
----- Original Message -----
From: "P.J. Alling" <[email protected]>
To: "PDML" <[email protected]>
Sent: Tuesday, September 16, 2014 1:35:13 PM
Subject: Re: Took Another Barn Drive
The rock and the barn, you kind of have two focal points that are too
close together, they don't actually complement each other. In fact the
Rock pulls the viewer away from the barn and the barn pulls the viewer
away from the rock. If you were able to place the rock differently in
the frame, maybe it would work.
On 9/16/2014 4:01 PM, Jack Davis wrote:
You'll be glad to read that I'm about out of barns to "share" with you.
These to perspectives (color/B&W) were shot this PM.
Your tolerance and comments are invited.
Jack
http://photolightimages.com/aspupload/detail.asp?ID=820
http://photolightimages.com/aspupload/detail.asp?ID=821
http://photolightimages.com/aspupload/detail.asp?ID=822
http://photolightimages.com/aspupload/detail.asp?ID=823
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