Thanks, ann. Your words are especially appreciated considering your astute sense of composition. Also, agree with your comments re the 2nd and 4th. For the record, I'm not proud of them either.
Jack ----- Original Message ----- From: "Ann Sanfedele" <[email protected]> To: "PDML" <[email protected]> Sent: Tuesday, September 16, 2014 7:19:58 PM Subject: Re: Took Another Barn Drive Well I agree with KEn on the 2nd to 4th (especially about the palm tree) but I like the position of the boulder in the first one... the little rocks trailing off to the left, then the house in the middle and in the background the winding road make a pretty pleasing balance for me, as does the color of the land and the grasses. ann On 9/16/2014 16:11, Ken Waller wrote: > The first image has a great subject, well captured but I'd look for > another POV to position the rock so it doesn't detract from the barn - > maybe to the right of the barn using the roof line to line the rock up.. > As presented the rock is a detractor IMO > > The other 3 images don't work for me - the inclusion of the palm tree > really detracts. The color of the sky in the last image is other worldly > > Kenneth Waller > http://www.pentaxphotogallery.com/kennethwaller > > ----- Original Message ----- From: "Jack Davis" <[email protected]> > Subject: Took Another Barn Drive > > >> >> >> You'll be glad to read that I'm about out of barns to "share" with you. >> These to perspectives (color/B&W) were shot this PM. >> >> Your tolerance and comments are invited. >> >> Jack >> >> http://photolightimages.com/aspupload/detail.asp?ID=820 >> >> http://photolightimages.com/aspupload/detail.asp?ID=821 >> >> http://photolightimages.com/aspupload/detail.asp?ID=822 >> >> http://photolightimages.com/aspupload/detail.asp?ID=823 > > -- PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List [email protected] http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net to UNSUBSCRIBE from the PDML, please visit the link directly above and follow the directions. -- PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List [email protected] http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net to UNSUBSCRIBE from the PDML, please visit the link directly above and follow the directions.
