Well I agree with KEn on the 2nd to 4th (especially about the palm tree)
but I like the position of the boulder in the first one... the little
rocks trailing off to the left, then the house in the middle and in the
background the winding road make a pretty pleasing balance for me, as
does the color of the land and the grasses.
ann
On 9/16/2014 16:11, Ken Waller wrote:
The first image has a great subject, well captured but I'd look for
another POV to position the rock so it doesn't detract from the barn -
maybe to the right of the barn using the roof line to line the rock up..
As presented the rock is a detractor IMO
The other 3 images don't work for me - the inclusion of the palm tree
really detracts. The color of the sky in the last image is other worldly
Kenneth Waller
http://www.pentaxphotogallery.com/kennethwaller
----- Original Message ----- From: "Jack Davis" <[email protected]>
Subject: Took Another Barn Drive
You'll be glad to read that I'm about out of barns to "share" with you.
These to perspectives (color/B&W) were shot this PM.
Your tolerance and comments are invited.
Jack
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http://photolightimages.com/aspupload/detail.asp?ID=821
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