> On 23 Jan 2015, at 16:41, Ben Coman <[email protected]> wrote: > > Some feedback on design I hope is useful.
Hi Ben, your feedback is useful, but I want to stress that this is not a design contest: it is developers marketing to developers. The goal is to advertise what we have. BTW, in terms of marketing, we already lost to these guys: http://gt.moosetechnology.org the two movies are hard to beat, right ? Luckily they are on our side ;-) Sven > * Citizen - I like the perpendicular layout of "cite" and "zen". I never > got it before that it was for citations. Nice branding. Maybe you could put > a mortar board hat on top of the big "C" > > * Bloc - while considering copyright, maybe use a Tetris looking image for > the background (http://tinyurl.com/ktpdvwg) or > (http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Tetris#mediaviewer/File:NES_Tetris_Box_Front.jpg) > > * Flow - I find the text under the storm-trooper a bit negative and > confusing. I don't think you mean to imply that you can't actually do that > in Smalltalk, which is the impression I got. Maybe something like... > "Smalltalk _was_ the HTML5 single-page platform I was looking for!" or > just... > > Now the split of "consultants" over two lines grated, so I presumed to > wordsmith your text... > Flow's mission provides consultants, > startups and software houses > with a competitive full-stack Smalltalk > framework for quick demo delivery with > all the modern html5 features the > market expects today (2014). > Use tactically for gaining momentum > with prospects and clients, then > scale to full projects successfully > delivered by kickass > productive teams or individuals. > > Try to get the bottom of the github link text to align with the bottom of the > stormtrooper image, so the whitespace beneath is a full width rectangle. > > You don't necessarily need to say what is the "front end" and what is the > "back end". Deleting that text provides the opportunity to stack the three > logos vertically, centred over the bottom left Qcode. Drop the "there" in > "favourite there" so it doesn't overhang the Qcode. > > Move the dots of the eyes to be looking at the word "flow" through the > whitespace left by moving the logos. > > (Sorry to go to town Sebastian, but I saw more potential.) > > HTH > cheers -ben > > P.S. Sorry I don't have any of my own. I really should resurrect my masters > project onto latest Pharo/Roassal. > > > On Fri, Jan 23, 2015 at 10:22 PM, Sven Van Caekenberghe <[email protected]> wrote: > > > On 23 Jan 2015, at 15:15, Esteban A. Maringolo <[email protected]> wrote: > > > > Sorry, what are those? > > > > I don't understand. :-/ > > These are 'posters' for the Pharo Project Expo for next week, afterwards they > will become available online too. > > You can make some if you like... > > > Esteban A. Maringolo > > > > > > 2015-01-22 17:36 GMT-03:00 stepharo <[email protected]>: > >> One on Voyage :) > > > > >
