> On 23 Jan 2015, at 18:33, Offray Vladimir Luna Cárdenas <[email protected]> > wrote: > > Yep, some data visualization and moldable tools on weddings and birthdays > would make a memorable party ;-)
Haha, indeed ! > Offray > > > El 23/01/15 a las 12:15, Ben Coman escribió: >> Thanks Sven. I wasn't clear on the context, and just sometimes I just can't >> stop the mind working. >> >> Agreed, those Moose movies were fantastic. I want to know if they hire out >> for >> weddings and birthdays ;) >> >> On Sat, Jan 24, 2015 at 1:10 AM, Sven Van Caekenberghe <[email protected] >> <mailto:[email protected]>> wrote: >> >> >> > On 23 Jan 2015, at 16:41, Ben Coman <[email protected]> wrote: >> > >> > Some feedback on design I hope is useful. >> >> Hi Ben, your feedback is useful, but I want to stress that this is not a >> design contest: it is developers marketing to developers. The goal is to >> advertise what we have. >> >> BTW, in terms of marketing, we already lost to these guys: >> >> http://gt.moosetechnology.org >> >> the two movies are hard to beat, right ? >> >> Luckily they are on our side ;-) >> >> Sven >> >> > * Citizen - I like the perpendicular layout of "cite" and "zen". I >> never got it before that it was for citations. Nice branding. Maybe you >> could put a mortar board hat on top of the big "C" >> > >> > * Bloc - while considering copyright, maybe use a Tetris looking image >> for the background (http://tinyurl.com/ktpdvwg) or >> >> (http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Tetris#mediaviewer/File:NES_Tetris_Box_Front.jpg) >> > >> > * Flow - I find the text under the storm-trooper a bit negative and >> confusing. I don't think you mean to imply that you can't actually do >> that >> in Smalltalk, which is the impression I got. Maybe something like... >> "Smalltalk _was_ the HTML5 single-page platform I was looking for!" or >> just... >> > >> > Now the split of "consultants" over two lines grated, so I presumed to >> wordsmith your text... >> > Flow's mission provides consultants, >> > startups and software houses >> > with a competitive full-stack Smalltalk >> > framework for quick demo delivery with >> > all the modern html5 features the >> > market expects today (2014). >> > Use tactically for gaining momentum >> > with prospects and clients, then >> > scale to full projects successfully >> > delivered by kickass >> > productive teams or individuals. >> > >> > Try to get the bottom of the github link text to align with the >> bottom of >> the stormtrooper image, so the whitespace beneath is a full width >> rectangle. >> > >> > You don't necessarily need to say what is the "front end" and what is >> the >> "back end". Deleting that text provides the opportunity to stack the >> three >> logos vertically, centred over the bottom left Qcode. Drop the "there" in >> "favourite there" so it doesn't overhang the Qcode. >> > >> > Move the dots of the eyes to be looking at the word "flow" through the >> whitespace left by moving the logos. >> > >> > (Sorry to go to town Sebastian, but I saw more potential.) >> > >> > HTH >> > cheers -ben >> > >> > P.S. Sorry I don't have any of my own. I really should resurrect my >> masters project onto latest Pharo/Roassal. >> > >> > >> > On Fri, Jan 23, 2015 at 10:22 PM, Sven Van Caekenberghe <[email protected] >> <mailto:[email protected]>> wrote: >> > >> > > On 23 Jan 2015, at 15:15, Esteban A. Maringolo <[email protected] >> <mailto:[email protected]>> wrote: >> > > >> > > Sorry, what are those? >> > > >> > > I don't understand. :-/ >> > >> > These are 'posters' for the Pharo Project Expo for next week, >> afterwards >> they will become available online too. >> > >> > You can make some if you like... >> > >> > > Esteban A. Maringolo >> > > >> > > >> > > 2015-01-22 17:36 GMT-03:00 stepharo <[email protected] >> <mailto:[email protected]>>: >> > >> One on Voyage :) >> > > >> > >> > >> > >> >> >> > >
