Thanks Sven. I wasn't clear on the context, and just sometimes I just can't stop the mind working.
Agreed, those Moose movies were fantastic. I want to know if they hire out for weddings and birthdays ;) On Sat, Jan 24, 2015 at 1:10 AM, Sven Van Caekenberghe <[email protected]> wrote: > > > On 23 Jan 2015, at 16:41, Ben Coman <[email protected]> wrote: > > > > Some feedback on design I hope is useful. > > Hi Ben, your feedback is useful, but I want to stress that this is not a > design contest: it is developers marketing to developers. The goal is to > advertise what we have. > > BTW, in terms of marketing, we already lost to these guys: > > http://gt.moosetechnology.org > > the two movies are hard to beat, right ? > > Luckily they are on our side ;-) > > Sven > > > * Citizen - I like the perpendicular layout of "cite" and "zen". I > never got it before that it was for citations. Nice branding. Maybe you > could put a mortar board hat on top of the big "C" > > > > * Bloc - while considering copyright, maybe use a Tetris looking image > for the background (http://tinyurl.com/ktpdvwg) or ( > http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Tetris#mediaviewer/File:NES_Tetris_Box_Front.jpg > ) > > > > * Flow - I find the text under the storm-trooper a bit negative and > confusing. I don't think you mean to imply that you can't actually do that > in Smalltalk, which is the impression I got. Maybe something like... > "Smalltalk _was_ the HTML5 single-page platform I was looking for!" or > just... > > > > Now the split of "consultants" over two lines grated, so I presumed to > wordsmith your text... > > Flow's mission provides consultants, > > startups and software houses > > with a competitive full-stack Smalltalk > > framework for quick demo delivery with > > all the modern html5 features the > > market expects today (2014). > > Use tactically for gaining momentum > > with prospects and clients, then > > scale to full projects successfully > > delivered by kickass > > productive teams or individuals. > > > > Try to get the bottom of the github link text to align with the bottom > of the stormtrooper image, so the whitespace beneath is a full width > rectangle. > > > > You don't necessarily need to say what is the "front end" and what is > the "back end". Deleting that text provides the opportunity to stack the > three logos vertically, centred over the bottom left Qcode. Drop the > "there" in "favourite there" so it doesn't overhang the Qcode. > > > > Move the dots of the eyes to be looking at the word "flow" through the > whitespace left by moving the logos. > > > > (Sorry to go to town Sebastian, but I saw more potential.) > > > > HTH > > cheers -ben > > > > P.S. Sorry I don't have any of my own. I really should resurrect my > masters project onto latest Pharo/Roassal. > > > > > > On Fri, Jan 23, 2015 at 10:22 PM, Sven Van Caekenberghe <[email protected]> > wrote: > > > > > On 23 Jan 2015, at 15:15, Esteban A. Maringolo <[email protected]> > wrote: > > > > > > Sorry, what are those? > > > > > > I don't understand. :-/ > > > > These are 'posters' for the Pharo Project Expo for next week, afterwards > they will become available online too. > > > > You can make some if you like... > > > > > Esteban A. Maringolo > > > > > > > > > 2015-01-22 17:36 GMT-03:00 stepharo <[email protected]>: > > >> One on Voyage :) > > > > > > > > > > > >
