Yep, some data visualization and moldable tools on weddings and
birthdays would make a memorable party ;-)
Offray
El 23/01/15 a las 12:15, Ben Coman escribió:
Thanks Sven. I wasn't clear on the context, and just sometimes I just can't
stop the mind working.
Agreed, those Moose movies were fantastic. I want to know if they hire out for
weddings and birthdays ;)
On Sat, Jan 24, 2015 at 1:10 AM, Sven Van Caekenberghe <[email protected]
<mailto:[email protected]>> wrote:
> On 23 Jan 2015, at 16:41, Ben Coman <[email protected]> wrote:
>
> Some feedback on design I hope is useful.
Hi Ben, your feedback is useful, but I want to stress that this is not a
design contest: it is developers marketing to developers. The goal is to
advertise what we have.
BTW, in terms of marketing, we already lost to these guys:
http://gt.moosetechnology.org
the two movies are hard to beat, right ?
Luckily they are on our side ;-)
Sven
> * Citizen - I like the perpendicular layout of "cite" and "zen". I
never got it before that it was for citations. Nice branding. Maybe you
could put a mortar board hat on top of the big "C"
>
> * Bloc - while considering copyright, maybe use a Tetris looking image
for the background (http://tinyurl.com/ktpdvwg) or
(http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Tetris#mediaviewer/File:NES_Tetris_Box_Front.jpg)
>
> * Flow - I find the text under the storm-trooper a bit negative and
confusing. I don't think you mean to imply that you can't actually do that
in Smalltalk, which is the impression I got. Maybe something like...
"Smalltalk _was_ the HTML5 single-page platform I was looking for!" or
just...
>
> Now the split of "consultants" over two lines grated, so I presumed to
wordsmith your text...
> Flow's mission provides consultants,
> startups and software houses
> with a competitive full-stack Smalltalk
> framework for quick demo delivery with
> all the modern html5 features the
> market expects today (2014).
> Use tactically for gaining momentum
> with prospects and clients, then
> scale to full projects successfully
> delivered by kickass
> productive teams or individuals.
>
> Try to get the bottom of the github link text to align with the bottom
of
the stormtrooper image, so the whitespace beneath is a full width
rectangle.
>
> You don't necessarily need to say what is the "front end" and what is
the
"back end". Deleting that text provides the opportunity to stack the three
logos vertically, centred over the bottom left Qcode. Drop the "there" in
"favourite there" so it doesn't overhang the Qcode.
>
> Move the dots of the eyes to be looking at the word "flow" through the
whitespace left by moving the logos.
>
> (Sorry to go to town Sebastian, but I saw more potential.)
>
> HTH
> cheers -ben
>
> P.S. Sorry I don't have any of my own. I really should resurrect my
masters project onto latest Pharo/Roassal.
>
>
> On Fri, Jan 23, 2015 at 10:22 PM, Sven Van Caekenberghe <[email protected]
<mailto:[email protected]>> wrote:
>
> > On 23 Jan 2015, at 15:15, Esteban A. Maringolo <[email protected]
<mailto:[email protected]>> wrote:
> >
> > Sorry, what are those?
> >
> > I don't understand. :-/
>
> These are 'posters' for the Pharo Project Expo for next week, afterwards
they will become available online too.
>
> You can make some if you like...
>
> > Esteban A. Maringolo
> >
> >
> > 2015-01-22 17:36 GMT-03:00 stepharo <[email protected]
<mailto:[email protected]>>:
> >> One on Voyage :)
> >
>
>
>
